Alrighty, I watched Episode 4 to check it out.
First, you do you. That's always sound advice. The reason being is that we all see the world differently.
Second, their was very little had to gripe about with the video, only that during cuts and transitions there was stuttering which at first was fine, but after a while I was able to see it every time, so just make sure that there are as little stutters as physically possible.
Third, I liked the adding of music, I personally don't because I like the moments to be a continued story and in that moment.
Fourth, the video as very long for one continues 4ish note track, maybe choose something that's longer, or choose the really best clips and make it 5 mins long, but the video itself was perfect, I enjoyed it so I don't know if shortening it is necessary, just a different song that has more to it. Or change song when the moods change.
Yeah, so that's I really took note on, maybe also make sure to fix your friends audio since one had a bad mic, lower him so the spikes don't show up.
You are doing good as you are though, loved it.
I have a favor to ask in return, you don't need to though. Would you be able to take a look at my videos and see what's up? Moments Of: Counter Strike (2) Would be good to try, but if you don't wish to then let me know.
Hope I was able to provide enough tips that helped you in anyway, thank you.