Request Channel Review (Mostly my 2 newest videos)

[9Vultz]

So i recently am turning away from tutorials and more into gaming, i like to think the quality of my videos are good. The quantity on the other hand not so much, i been trying to upload at least 3 times a week and since im out of college and have all summer off i think i can actually do it. Im not really interested on the review of my older videos but rather my 2 newer videos!

Other than that just wanna know what i can improve on.!!


https://www.youtube.com/c/9vultz

 

[Thijstastic]

I think you should try to be more enthusiastic. Your voice is kinda monotone and that makes me feel bored and click the video away.
Secondly, try to use playlists and the cards feature.

 

[Phil Kidd]

So i recently am turning away from tutorials and more into gaming, i like to think the quality of my videos are good. The quantity on the other hand not so much, i been trying to upload at least 3 times a week and since im out of college and have all summer off i think i can actually do it. Im not really interested on the review of my older videos but rather my 2 newer videos!

Other than that just wanna know what i can improve on.!!


https://www.youtube.com/c/9vultz

Yea, you need to up your mic volume (try normalizing it in audacity, or perhaps compression with some gain). I think your commentary style is fine, everyone has their own way. Not everyone can be as obnoxious as jacksepticeye.

Not too familiar with Stellaris, but the tutorial type of content is never a bad choice. I'd certainly like to see some sort of channel trailer to know what you're about. Other than that, keep making content, keep improving. It's a never ending process.