Could I Have Some Advice?

[Achillean]

I've just uploaded my first video, and I would like to know what I could do to improve it. The video is about me criticizing certain types of channels, and adding some terrible jokes.

 

[Phil Kidd]

Hell yeah, F*CK THOSE MINCRAFT CHANNELS!

But for serious, harping on little kids is kinda heavy handed. I'd rather you critisize larger channels who make **** content, like Jinx or CJissocool for example (plus you'll get more search hits that way). Anyone can **** on a kid's terrible minecraft channel, because there are hundreds of them.

Your rhetoric and audio quality are great though.

 

[Achillean]

Hell yeah, F*CK THOSE MINCRAFT CHANNELS!

But for serious, harping on little kids is kinda heavy handed. I'd rather you critisize larger channels who make **** content, like Jinx or CJissocool for example (plus you'll get more search hits that way). Anyone can **** on a kid's terrible minecraft channel, because there are hundreds of them.

Your rhetoric and audio quality are great though.

Thanks. I'll take this advice.[DOUBLEPOST=1451155551][/DOUBLEPOST]

Hell yeah, F*CK THOSE MINCRAFT CHANNELS!

But for serious, harping on little kids is kinda heavy handed. I'd rather you critisize larger channels who make **** content, like Jinx or CJissocool for example (plus you'll get more search hits that way). Anyone can **** on a kid's terrible minecraft channel, because there are hundreds of them.

Your rhetoric and audio quality are great though.

I have just done a video on both Jinx and CJ.