Request Honestly Tell Me How My Commentary Is

[TheGaminCentral]

Hey guys for 2 years I have been in youtube and I love making these videos and I wasn't growing enough and so I guess I didn't knew but maybe my commentary ain't good enough....all those times people say my commentary is good because they just saw like the beginning part of the video
Maybe after a while I become boring maybe I suck at commentating so please guys I am posting one video here and I want to know I really want to know how my commentary is...and if it is bad tell me what to do....how to do a commentary...what do I lack
For all these days I was living in a shadow so take me out of the shadow and help me

 

[WolvenSparky]

Everything's nice, in my opinion, however I'd like to hear the game more. Make the game audio louder than the music! Nice video though.

 

[Cyramex]

Your commentary is very good and your video is high quality. My only suggestion is that you either get rid of the music or the game volume. Mixing both is not a good idea...

 

[TheGaminCentral]

Did u guys watched the full video...was I boring in any place because some told me I become boring after a while in the video