So here my brief review :
- The music does go well with the video though try and keep this at a level volume if at all possible, it seems like it got very loud at 1.15 and continued like that occassionally - I know this is due to the music track but I think if the music would have been more mellow throughout it might of been a bit better
- Montages can be a bit funny sometimes, some people tend to do montages focused on one map / match while others will integrate these across maps / matches - I think you did very well for your first attempt and especially liked the battlefield intro that you had
Montages are basically a highlight of a particular type of content / style of play, its always best to consider what your trying to showcase during the videos - for example with gameplay are you trying to show off good shots you made like at (2.09) or a collection of quick deaths you had like just prior to that