Firstly, I did not find anything wrong with the sound/volume, this could be because of how my sound is set up but I think it is fine.
Secondly, even though you didn't ask for this specifically, I think your outro needs some serious work, I would advise contacting a GFX editor, which can be found in our
Requests and Offers page. The reason being, the footage is squashed out of the usual proportion, which makes it look quite bad, also for a second, you could see your template at the end, due to your footage ending, I would also advise trying to get better at editing, just so these mistakes can be adjusted and make your videos look more professional.
If there is anything else you want me to review, just quote my post and tell me, or otherwise, you can check other peoples threads for reviews, or people who are willing to review other people, which includes me.
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