I personally checked this video out when you commented on my introduction thread, then I came here looking to show off my content out and I was like, "oh heck, I've seen this before" so lemme give you some input.
1) The quality and angle is phenomenal, I couldn't believe that was only 720p. Truly look & sounds good.
2) I also do a series sorta like this, with more cussing and vulgar themes, but the way you're doing it is so energetic and super flowly I actually like it a lot. I even subbed because of this one video. To hell with 2nd graders.
3) I was gonna critique you, honestly, but I find all of your content super solid and consistent. Keep up the good work.
edit: apparently curse words get starred, fixed those